Hi, today I had the elevator pitch on my Remembox. I would like some feedback on it. Please comment freely!

For me the most important things are:

  • Did you understand the product?
  • Did you like what you heard?
  • Were you inspired by the pitch?
  • If you were me and wanted to start a enterprise, would you go for this or scrap it?

Axel Heumann Bauer Werin

P.S. If you are fed up with studying tonight and still think you need to study? Watch some entertainment tv-series! The new Southpark season started with the episode: Go Fund Yourself. Other good tv-series are: Silicon Valley and How to Make it in America.

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3 Thoughts on “Feedback on Remembox (place holder title) elevator pitch

  1. Avatar werner on October 13, 2014 at 5:34 pm said:

    Hi Axel! I must say I really liked your pitch and the idea. I strongly recognize the need/problem you addressed – forgetting my keys, phone or wallet is something that happens on a regular basis and a very annoying issue – and the product was easy to understand.

    A couple of questions I’ve thought of after the lecture are:
    How will the venture generate revenue? Will you sell RFID-tags separately to attach to one’s devices or some other solution?

    Anyway, great pitch!

  2. Avatar friwik on October 13, 2014 at 5:39 pm said:

    I really enjoyed your way of “telling a story” – it is a winning concept when pitching! As mentioned above, I would have liked a little more information about the technique (but that might be because I am a mechatronics and product nerd). Great energy, well done!

  3. Avatar L.Boldin on October 14, 2014 at 10:16 pm said:

    I liked your one sentence Round-up at the end of the pitch. I think it are the little, short slogans that imprint them in your memory. By the way I think it is great that you still get a mark for this pitch! Great that you insisted on holding the pitch even though Serdar told you, you won’t get a mark. 🙂

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