The tone of the video was good as it states that the concern is serious and the pain was clear.
Background noise should be taken care of .
Could have had visual aids.
Plain talking doesn’t hold the attention for a long duration.
I like how you took enough time at the beginning to explain the pain of sick children, having the blue sky and a tree in the backgroung was a clever idea: it makes the video much more friendly compared to a boring wall cosnidering it is a “monologue style” video.
However here are some points for improvement:
– you should use some pictures and tables, this monologue videos are quite hard to memorize and to understand what the main points are, explaining the pain can be done orally but how the product works needs to be explained with graphs, arrows and pop-ups
– might consider playing roles: such as “this is XY, she has a kid” (team member 1 comes in) and “this is XZ, a sick kid” (team memeber 2 or a doll). This would make the video more dynamic and attention grapping
The video was well done. As i said for other videos, is difficult to follow the idea if there are only people speaking on the presentation, but in your case, since the speaker changed over time, it wasn’t a challenge.
I just advice to reduce the noise and maybe to add some images were you are speaking.
Anyway, the idea is really good and you explained everything needed to understand it.
I like that the video was done outside it makes it more pleasant.
Explain the problem first was really efficient to understand the purpose of your venture.
It was good to have different speakers, however, maybe add some visual things more than just people speaking could make your video more attractive. That could help to keep the attention of your audience. For instance, add some drawings of your product and your app could help to understand what is your venture.
Moreover, add some videos of the interviews you have done can be interesting and give your venture more credibility.
I like the idea of shooting outside, but there are a lot of aspect that should be taken care of when doing so. Background noise and a clear audio are the most important , and in your video it’s hard to understand some parts.
You did a great job explaining the customer’s pains and your proposed solution, but some visual aids could have been included to further help you in your explanation.
I like the fact that you have some interviews to back up your statements, but i think having some excerpt could have helped you a lot into convincing investor.
The tone of the video was good as it states that the concern is serious and the pain was clear.
Background noise should be taken care of .
Could have had visual aids.
Plain talking doesn’t hold the attention for a long duration.
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I like how you took enough time at the beginning to explain the pain of sick children, having the blue sky and a tree in the backgroung was a clever idea: it makes the video much more friendly compared to a boring wall cosnidering it is a “monologue style” video.
However here are some points for improvement:
– you should use some pictures and tables, this monologue videos are quite hard to memorize and to understand what the main points are, explaining the pain can be done orally but how the product works needs to be explained with graphs, arrows and pop-ups
– might consider playing roles: such as “this is XY, she has a kid” (team member 1 comes in) and “this is XZ, a sick kid” (team memeber 2 or a doll). This would make the video more dynamic and attention grapping
The video was well done. As i said for other videos, is difficult to follow the idea if there are only people speaking on the presentation, but in your case, since the speaker changed over time, it wasn’t a challenge.
I just advice to reduce the noise and maybe to add some images were you are speaking.
Anyway, the idea is really good and you explained everything needed to understand it.
I like that the video was done outside it makes it more pleasant.
Explain the problem first was really efficient to understand the purpose of your venture.
It was good to have different speakers, however, maybe add some visual things more than just people speaking could make your video more attractive. That could help to keep the attention of your audience. For instance, add some drawings of your product and your app could help to understand what is your venture.
Moreover, add some videos of the interviews you have done can be interesting and give your venture more credibility.
I like the idea of shooting outside, but there are a lot of aspect that should be taken care of when doing so. Background noise and a clear audio are the most important , and in your video it’s hard to understand some parts.
You did a great job explaining the customer’s pains and your proposed solution, but some visual aids could have been included to further help you in your explanation.
I like the fact that you have some interviews to back up your statements, but i think having some excerpt could have helped you a lot into convincing investor.
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